15 of November 2012

Chernyse ,
     
Today , I felt very confusing because of I made a lot of mistakes before ... I was trying so hard to walk out from my past but it's impossible .Every single night , when I close up my eyes , my mind will start playing our memories . I will cry , I will hate myself , I will feel disappointed with myself . My friends told me that I should 'leave' my past and don't 'live' there . I think you're the only girl can drive me crazy , because of you I changed . At the end , I deserve nothing from you because of the mistake I have done . To be honest , I'm very happy with my single life . At least I don't even need to worry whether you're chatting with European lads about time or chatting with them about 'dirty stuff' .

                                                                                                                                  Your Lovely ,
                                                                                                                             davenlokyonghao

The fruitcake special

SETTING

The Factory

-The Amos Cosmetics factory is located in New Jersey , USA .

-Anna works as a chemist who designs perfume in the factory .

The French Restaurant

-It is an expensive restaurant .

-A brawl breaks out there when Mr Amos takes Anna there for dinner .

Anna's Home

-Anna lives with her mother on the other side of town .

CHARACTERS

Main character : Anna 

Characteristics : 1)Creative - I decided to throw in a piece of the fruitcake Momma had packed for my lunch 

                                            (Page 31)

                         2)Curious - Although I couldn't explain why Mr Amos had suddenly found me attractive , I  

                                            really wanted to find out . (Page 38)

                         3)Realistic - But I know I am just ordinary looking . (Page 34)

                                          - Men have a way of calling you 'nice' when they really mean they don't care 

                                            how you look . (Page 39)

Main character : Mr David Amos

Characteristic   : 1)Superficial - preferred to be with pretty young models . (page 32 & 34)

                          2)Snobbish - Never dream of saying nice things to ordinary looking girl . (Page 32)

                          3)Keen sense of smell - Mr Amos had an expert nose for perfumes . (page 32)

Minor character : Armstrong 

Characteristic    :1)Determined - Wanted to be success before asking me(Anna) out . (Page 58)

                          2)Successful - Now owned the pizza company . (Page 58)               

THEMES

-Love

-Physical attraction

-Marriage

-Vanity

-Social status

MORAL VALUES

-Do not compromise our values and dignity

-Do not be influenced by the attention of the opposite sex 

-Work hard to achieve success 

POINT OF VIEW

The story is told in the first person point of view as Anna narrates her story to us and shares her thoughts and feelings .

LANGUAGE,STYLE AND DICTION

The language is simple and conversational in mode.Direct speech is well utilised to make the story interesting although it is told in the first person . There are many humorous moments which have been presented in clear,simple language . The mood and atmosphere for specific moments have been created using the literary devices listed below .

DICTION:Good expressions used in the story

-Dark,handsome English guy

-Polite conversations

-A wasted opportunity 

我的女儿~黄可薇

还没认识我，你会觉得我很怪...
当你认识我，你会觉得我很傻...
当我们熟了，你会觉得我很好...

我们的父女感情很好吧...
你对我的影响还蛮厉害...
我觉得我很幸福...
因为你对我的好...

你要给我记着
1）晚餐一定要吃
2)   你还欠我巧克力水
3）我以后去新加坡你带路了啦
4）不要因为乐团的事给累坏了
5）不要一直熬夜（你要做国宝了呀）
6）不要一直给自己压力了啦
7）记得你永远是阿爸心中最好的女儿

我们认识的时间短，可是我们很了解对方...
You light up my life form the dark

Dave Days :)

DAVE DAYS WHAT MAKES YOU SO AWESOME :)

Dave Days is a young boy with big dreams ever since he picked up his first guitar he has written music and is working his creative mind, his music and abilities were unknown in the world until the Internet came with the internet, I mean YouTube Dave began posting videos of his music and other skits have over 200 000 subscribers and over 50 million views in just over a year Dave is often referred to as an entertainer musician comedian and Miley Cyrus boyfriend ... I mean handsome single man, he has been seen several times wearing a green polo and white hat, he dreams of moving to LA after high school to start working for Diamond Factory and travel around the world with their musical creations Catch Dave Days on YouTube...

                                                                   We're Just Kids...

明天还是最后一天？

我每天都在想我到底还有几个明天，如果明天我离开了这世界我会有遗憾吗？我真的很多愿望还没实现可是我更加害怕今天就是我的最后一天...

我开始害怕了因为时间一分一秒没打算停下来，我很无助...我还需要读大学的，我还需要买很多东西，我还需要对父母好，我还需要和你在一起:)

我已经觉得我变得很懦弱了，我不像以前什么都不怕的我了...岁月大了，压力重了就自然会成熟了...我害怕面对压力但我从不会向压力低头，我害怕面对你对我的冷淡但我从不逃避你，我害怕失去一切但我会珍惜这一秒拥有的全部...

我开始学会了珍惜，感谢和感受...这一生我没有拥有很多好东西可是我珍惜现在的一切...
我会用我的每一个明天来，等待一个弥补的机会...

命运不是我们掌控的可是生命是我们自己掌控的:)

You're the love of my heart :)

我为你做的事情在你眼里是多余可是我真的很尽力的去完成每一个对你的承诺...我对你说过的每句都是真心的，可是我不小心离开你了...我以前只是一个小混混，可是我现在只是一个很平凡的男孩...你以前对我好，不好，浪漫和不浪漫在我心里永远不会消失...当你真心爱一个人可是那个人却对你不好，你会明白这感受吗？

真爱是不能长久的...

我真的觉得我们是真心相爱可是老天爷却不认同我们,我错过了你~我也不好受...

我现在不会再爱上别人因为你离开我的这一段日子我认识了很多女孩可是我发觉你依然是唯一...

我虽然不是你的初恋可是我会让你成为我的最后一恋...

我问我自己你到底是谁，为何无法忘记？

答案因为我真心的爱你...

chernyse chng you're playing a vital position in my life :)